Talk:Smart City

Final remark

Dear Maria,

Now that the course and the grading is over, I would like to congratulate you for the good contribution you have made to the reflection of such relevant matters. I hope you enjoyed moving around the realm of political philosophy, applied to the current information society.

I have really enjoyed discussing with you and I hope we have again the chance to meet, here or there (keep my contact and if you come to my region let me know and I'll show you around).

All the best,

José María Díaz Nafría (talk) 13:52, 27 July 2024 (CEST)

Discussion about preliminary versions

Review 1

Dear Maria,

Though your contribution is long enough, an AI likelihood analysis of AI composable texts yield that about the half of your content is AI composable. It's important to reduce that share of AI composable text. I'm very sure you work well on the topic, but sometimes if we just paraphrase some text we might act similar to what AI is doing and it looks like we wouldn't work that much. Therefore it is better to put things using your own words to avoid that it is AI composable. By the way, sorry that I showed this edition page unintentional while willing to show Ludwigs. I wanted to clarify the point.

All the best,

José María Díaz Nafría (talk) 20:48, 25 June 2024 (CEST)

Dear Maria,

As I indicated you, the opening of new article has to be done in the draft namespace. For that reason I have moved the article to this namespace.

All the best,

José María Díaz Nafría (talk) 20:17, 24 June 2024 (CEST)

Answer

Dear Professor Diaz,

thank you for your feedback.

It is unfortunate that so much AI has been detected in my article. As I mentioned when I uploaded my paper, I have used AI (Grammarly) to correct my sentences and I have probably overused it. Additionally, I have done some minor reformulating with OpenAI but that was around 3-4 sentences.

I will make sure to rewrite my article until sunday so you can maybe give me some more feedback before the exams start.

I have one question and namely: How will my grade be affected after I correct the article? If the damage is significant maybe it would be the best if I just redo the course next semester.

I apologize for the inconvenience.

Kind regards

Maria Kavedzija (talk) 21:17, 25 June 2024 (CEST)

Hello Professor Diaz,

I have another question. You said yesterday that it is possible to change things in our articles until the middle of July. Does this also include my article? Or does this detection of AI mean that I automatically fail the course? Please let me know so I can plan my time for editing accordingly. Many thanks and once again I apologize for the inconvenience.

Kind regards

Maria Kavedzija (talk) 12:25, 26 June 2024 (CEST)

Review 2

Dear María,

There's no way you will fail the course for the high rate of AI generable contents. As I have explained there are different reasons why this may happen. Your explanation is convincing and if the usual issues derived from the abuse of AI are not in your article, there's no problem, but I still have to review it in detail, check the coherence and alignment with the evaluation criteria, then I can give you a more specific feedback. My warning was as a preliminary notice for you to know what the analysis had yielded. If it is improved, or clarified there's no problem.

Thinking loudly on AI long-term impact, I deeply hope it learns from us instead of we accommodate to their indications and manners, otherwise we'll be trapped in a closed circle incapable to walk away where we are and build utopic horizons.

Most cordial greetings,

José María Díaz Nafría (talk) 19:52, 2 July 2024 (CEST)

Answer

Dear Professor Díaz, I updated my article last night. Hopefully, it´s better now regarding the AI content. This time I avoided using AI-powered tools to help with grammar and sentence structure. While I was rewriting the passages of the article I used some text detectors that I found online and they still found some "AI-generated" context. I have tried to get it down to zero, but I think some of the words I used are very common in AI content.

Kind regards, Maria Kavedzija Maria Kavedzija (talk) 22:02, 14 July 2024 (CEST)